I am not a huge fan of this story. I am not sure what the message or plot is exactly. Or even who all the characters are. I don't think this story did a great job of character development or defining the different characters. It seems the main three characters are the man, the wife, and a girl spirit.
It seems like it is a story about a husband who comes home to his wife who is living in a new house because the old house is being haunted. The husband makes them move back to the old house, some interactions happen with the spirit, and then the husband seems to catch the spirit and I assume he rids it of the house in some way.
The story seems like it is saying he is doing this out of love for his wife and for their house?? I am not completely sure
It seems the message is "the greater the sin, the greater the pleasure"
This writer likes to start his stories with "THERE"
I like the consistency of his style
I like the flow of this story
The plot is better defined than The Haunted House story, and I enjoy following along. I found myself thinkng what the wife was going to do next and if she would be discovered for her deception. In this story, she was not discovered until the end by some rumor.
The husband is the protagonist in this story, while the wife is more the antagonist. Due to her deception of her husband and all of the other people.
I will say, she seems like a very cunning character indeed. Capable of deceiving all of those people. However, she used her cunning in an unadmirable way.
I enjoyed this story. It kept me guessing, involved, and curious.
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